It was interesting for me to read your corrections of Mei Keneko’s journal entry. Altogether, you made corrections in 18 different areas: style, verb form, clause use, preposition, vocabulary, articles, capitals, plurality, markers, adjectives, punctuation, clarification, word order, hyphenation, sentence, excess words, verb/object and spelling (Sachi).
Ema and Saran did something even more interesting. They changed the text completely to make it true for them. In other words, the boys corrected the text for grammar, but the girls corrected the text for meaning i.e. meaning as it relates to them.
Perhaps you have different-type brains!
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